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This is the original post of Isabella

Hello everybody:

Today I’m going to talk about my career and his contribution.  I choose this because before I study another career: architecture. And obviously I’m not happy whit this, a focused my motivation in the anthropology, because in the several architecture areas, the patrimonial and conservation Is my favorites.  Furthermore I believe that the anthropologists can contribute to the society in a rich form, understand the non visible structures of society and culture associate that.  And maybe the anthropology can be become in an excellent tool for building the future based on the tolerance and respect of the cultural and biological diversity.  

My favorite topic is the archaeology, an is the mention that I will choose the next semester.  I have some doubts about the mention, for example how difficult the papers are, level organization required to the career, spaces relaxed and I of course the advantages and disadvantages at the moment to create useful knowledge to understand the society,  in general a lot of questions about this! The career is beautiful, include an interdisciplinary approach and mix to exacts and inexact things, study the complex system that the human ever create anymore.

Well I hope this post I have been nice for you!

Bye 

And here is my corrected version:

Hello everybody:

Today I’m going to talk about my career and his contribution.  I choose this because before I study [T: I studied] another career: architecture. And obviously I’m not [T : I wasn’t]  happy whit this, a focused [λ, NA: so I focused] my motivation in the anthropology, because in the several architecture areas, the patrimonial and conservation Is my favorites[S/P : the patrimony and conservation are my favourite].  Furthermore I believe that the anthropologists can contribute to the society in a rich form, understand [λ: because they understand] the non visible structures of society and culture associate that [WO: and how culture is associated to that].  And maybe the anthropology can be become [( ): can become] an excellent tool for building the future based on the tolerance and respect of the cultural and biological diversity.  

My favorite topic is the archaeology, an [S: and] is the mention that I will choose the next semester [(): choose next semester].  I have some doubts about the mention, for example how difficult the papers are, level organization required to the career, spaces relaxed [? M: spaces to relax/ spaces to be relaxed] and I of course [( ), P: and, of course] the advantages and disadvantages at the moment to create useful knowledge to understand the society, in general a lot of questions about this! The career is beautiful, include an interdisciplinary approach and mix to exacts and inexact things [WW, S/P: mix the exact and inexact things], study the complex system that the human ever create anymore [? M].

Well I hope this post I have been [( ), C: this post has been] nice for you

Bye